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 Post subject: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:39 pm 
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Hi peeps

Not sure if this is the right section on the forum, But have been working on a promo video for my company, Let me know want you think ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ed4iiZmiPr0



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 Post subject: Re: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:46 pm 
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excellent mate, very nicely done.
the only thing I'm not that struck with, is the sparkly stars right at the end. IMHO it makes it look a little too much like a christmas ad, but thats just my personal opinion. its also a little difficult to make out that it says professional service on the side of the car (initially i wasn't sure if it was advertising that you do servicing as well), although that may view better full screen.
other than that its pretty awesome :grinthumb:


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 Post subject: Re: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:58 pm 
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Cheers dude, The stars are on part of my logo. Thanks for your feedback will look into changing the service part to make it a bit more clear



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 Post subject: Re: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:59 pm 
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its only nit picking really mate, its a great ad, i really love it.


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 Post subject: Re: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 6:01 pm 
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;-D all feedback is great tho fella



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 Post subject: Re: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:31 am 
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I quite liked the blue lights. Looks like an awesome video. What program did you use to make it?


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 Post subject: Re: Gleam Promo Video
PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:49 am 
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The video is excellent :)

I went to your website and there are a few minor points:
- the list on the left shifts a bit from left to right when selecting a different part
( example: when you click 'paint correction' and then 'loyalty card' )
- make the left selection sticky, it scrolls with the right explanation part
- the text shifts downwards sometimes in comparrison to the big logo on the top
- lettertype: sometimes bigger, then it's bold then it's regular: that's usually normal if you want to highlight something,
but how it's presented now it looks a bit cheap
- try to make you own in stead of a 'vistaprint-one' .... personally hate those logo's
- make the DAD-logo a bit smaller: you can count the pixels now ( the text part )

I hope this was helpfull ( not ment as a flame or whatever ! ), again the vid was excellent and proves you have the skills !



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